A bad 
proposal
          focuses on you and not the client.
- They give a detailed description of your company’s products and services
 - They are generic and easily reused for other clients
 - They have pages and pages of unnecessary information
 - They are dense with overly sophisticated corporate and technical jargon
 - They offer no proof that you can do the job
 
A winning 
proposal
          focuses on the client, their needs, and their objectives.
- They always contain a solution or recommendation
 - They make specific observations about the client and the job
 - They demonstrate what the results will look like after taking the recommended action
 - They are concise, focused, and easy to read
 - They set you apart from your competition
 
A bad 
pitch
          relies too heavily on supporting aids, removing any engagement with the client.
- They dilute the impact of your solution by giving too much detail
 - They have too many slides with too much text, leading to ‘death by PowerPoint’
 - They are unrehearsed or over-scripted
 - They cram too much information into a short space of time
 
A winning 
pitch
          leaves the client feeling confident that you can deliver results.
- They communicate important messages clearly and concisely
 - They deliver complex information in a way that is easy to understand
 - They give the client an insight into what it would be like to work with you
 - They are purity, engaging, and memorable
 - They finish on time